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                                 by Iuliana Bulancea

Never cared and never seen,
Never had beauty within
But a perfect face indeed!
Still, is that love what I feel?

Never seen behind your eyes,
Never reached that soul inside
And my eyes, ah!, were so blind!
Never seen but you and I!

Ah, but what's infatuation?
Can't I understand emotions?
If I'd known all these sensations,
True love's chemical reaction…

You made me cry an acid rain
And let me drown through all this pain.
I turned to ashes on my way
To Heaven… 'cause *Al Kalium's my name.

Couldn't sense the smell of poison,
Couldn't feel my blood was flowing,
Couldn't see that your breath drugged me…
Never known until Death's coming!

My deeps wounds that bled so much
Never hurt until your touch
Tried to lock the life you caught…
Lock it up and then forget!

Never wanted me to scream…
Can't you see all that I feel?
Can't believe all this is real,
But I'll scream and make you hear:

Your disgusting soul is smelling
Like the suffocating chlor
And your green eyes made of poison
Sank my heart in vitriol,

But all this pain is meant to end
And you're going to forget.
Make me love you once again
In an other life perhaps!

Never known and never seen
What's the soul that's inside me,
Never understood emotions,
True love's chemical reaction…

*** Al Kalium – means 'plant ashes'
I. the preview image is NOT mine! the artist is :iconthe-girl-who:
II. I'll soon submit the original 'cover' for this poem:D 'soon' means a couple of weeks ^^; sorry, but don't have the time to do something good right now
III. the last time I wrote a poem was a very long time ago, so don't be too harsh:laughing: - the truth is I want you to tell me your true opinion, no matter which is that. If you don't like it, just say it (but don't forget to mention why:D I need to know that so I can improve myself)
IV. don't forget to add a comment!:hungry:

Iuli:love:
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Bulbblesrdabae Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Love it but very sad :/
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Stonemetalrobot09 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Tragic. Very Tragic. I know how you feel.
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boxe-de-inchiriat Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ohhh:( that's not good, I wish nobody would have this feeling ever again.
wish you all the happiness in the world:)
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Stonemetalrobot09 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Geez thanks. But i know how it feels ta be like that not that I' m depressed lol.
But the passion behind it sometimes over takes me, to feel that desperation of needed love. The one who can't return you to it.
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xFwankiex Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Student Artisan Crafter
Wowww I love it :| <3 so dark and... ugh LOVE<3
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boxe-de-inchiriat Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:lol: thank you!:D
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Danielle-SS Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Je crois que les mots que tu as utilise sont faits pour ce poeme!
"Your disgusting soul is smelling
Like the suffocating chlor
And your green eyes made of poison
Sank my heart in vitriol..."
XD
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boxe-de-inchiriat Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ca c'est pourquoi je l'ai donne ce titre:D
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The-girl-who Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011
i loved the poem. a lot of emotion! great job. thanks for using my drawing! :hug:
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boxe-de-inchiriat Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm so glad!:love: thank you for such a great pic!:hug:
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